Archive for the ‘critique’ Category
Best in semantics, in the order of when submitted
Hank.
Huge leap from where you were at the beginning of the week. I’d give this a bit of TLC, mainly making sure that all the forms are aligning, top and bottom, and even kerning space between them.
Joe
Still feeling like you’re not giving it all you got. I’d like to see more concept in it, but this is the form that I think works the best.
Frank.
I like the poop solution too, but this one is has a nice balance to it. Go look at Paula Scher’s work to see how to take this further.
Elise
Good solid work. Still waiting on great from you.
Jessica
Shape has a very nice rhythm. Color it orange and you have a packaging design ready to go.
Lynn
Play with sizes and placement, but of many good poops, this one was the best. You had some really nice work there too - it was hard to pick the best.
